The Chocolate Factory,Descriptive Writing

IF I WAS IN A CHOCOLATE FACTORY FOR 24 HOURS WHAT WOULD I DO?
I would check out all the candy they have and also eat all the candy I can eat. The chocolatey chocolate waterfall will have lots of chocolate. If I ate that all I would get really sick. I think it would be just like the movie, Charlie and the chocolate factory. There will be chocolate, lollies, lollipops, bubblegum and much more candy. It will be the best day of my life if it actually happens. It would be so much fun, and I may be allowed to take my friends. We will be there all day eating all the candy we can eat for 24 hours. But if we ate a lot we would get a tummy ache. My favourite candy would probably be the chocolatey chocolate waterfall because there will be melted chocolate or it might be chocolate milk with extra chocolate.

Finding Fractions of Numbers

Show Not Tell Task

Show Not Tell

Tell sentence: It was a cold and rainy day.

Show sentence: The wind was blasting so hard like someone was bumping you really hard.
So the trees were swaying  everywhere like water. They were swaying so hard that
people were getting really bitter.
But at the same time there lips were turning violet like  grapes.
It was raining and cold everyday. So people where getting really impaired

Tell sentence: I went to the beach.

Show sentence: It was really really sizzling  that people needed sun cream for their
body so they don’t get burnt like burnt toast.
So they had a swim.They were swimming all day that they got frosty  like they were
in winter.But then they got really hot again

Tell sentence: Carol bought new shoes because hers broke.

Show sentence: They were really really aged.So they broke and got really dusty and sloppy

like sticky pudding.So she brought new shoes.They were really really pure.So when she brought
them she wore them everyday.