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Tuesday, 11 December 2018

Limerick Poetry

Limerick Poetry

WALT write poetry.
WALT use rhythm and rhyme.

Miss West and Mrs Moala’s example:



WRITE YOUR POEM
There once where a school,
And it was very cool,
But one day it got broken down,
Everyone got a frown,
But one day they found another school,

Thursday, 6 December 2018

Term 4 Animation Voice Over - Ako 3

Animation Voice Over
Walt be thoughtful about links between oral (spoken), written, and visual language to give purpose to our writing.
Walt use a variety of sentences and correctly use punctuation.

Your animation task: This term you have been creating an animation to illustrate a caveman narrative.

You were given this short blurb to help you plan for your animation:

Long ago, there was an ancient tribe from the country now known as _____________.
The tribe lived off the land and had to hunt and gather for their food.
In this land, the impressive _______________ was the ultimate prize because it provided food for the whole tribe. Only the most mighty and cunning warriors could hunt such an animal.

This is the story of one such tribe, on an epic hunt to catch one of these mighty animals.


PLAN-Just write some keywords to help when you write your sentences
`Introduce your animation (this doesn’t need to be long):
What are we learning about this term? (Inquiry topic + animation task)
What materials may have been used once upon a time to create cave art?
Your narrative:
Characters?3 men and a snake
Setting?volcano
Problem?another wild animal comes and kills one of the men
Solution?
Summary/ Conclusion - Thank your audience and ask for a comment to be left on your blog.


WRITE
Hi welcome to my animation.One day a wild snake was slithering across the ground.Then he reached three big volcanoes.When he got tired of slithering across the ground he stopped.When the three men found out he stopped.They quickly throwed there arrows.When the snake was completely dead the three men lift him up and took him to their cave.When they got to their cave they quickly cooked him up.When he was cooked they put him onto a plate and started eating him.The dinner was really good.I hope enjoyed my movie.     

Limerick Poetry


Limerick Poetry

WALT write poetry.
WALT use rhythm and rhyme.

Miss West and Mrs Moala’s example:



WRITE YOUR POEM
There once where a school,
And it was very cool,
But one day it got broken down,
Everyone got a frown,
But one day they found another school,

Tuesday, 4 December 2018

Christmas Poetry - Ako 3

Christmas Poetry

WALT write poetry.
WALT use rhythm and rhyme.

Miss West and Mrs Moala’s example:
WRITE YOUR POEM
One Christmas eve
Santa came with breve  
When Santa
came

He had candy canes
And he put them on the tree
He had presents in his sack

But he put them at the back
When it was early in the morning
Everyone woke up

Everyone was excited to open up there presents
And some of them got dresses and they were very pretty

When they finished opening there presents they went to breakfast


 

Friday, 2 November 2018

Intro to Term 4 Writing - planning and writing doc.




 Today it was the first day of school and we had immersion assembly.This term is term 4.The first team was team 1.They took the paper apart and then they all drawn different parts of a animal.When they were done painting they put it together and it was a lion.It looked so cool.Next it was team 2.The teacher's draw themselves on hyper studio and then put it in a movie.Then it was team 3.Team 3 got a big piece of paper and then the teachers started painting on the other teachers.Then the other teachers started lying on the piece of paper.When they were done they showed it to us and it looked amazing.After they showed us it was team 4.Team 4 was painting MR Moran.When they were all done they showed MR Moran and miss sio won.After team 4 it was team 5.When they started the teachers had bags on their back.When they got on the stage they sat down and they were at a art class.There art teacher was Mr Wiseman. It was really funny.When they where done Mr Burt showed us his costume and he was moui. When immersion assembly was finished we went to class.  


Wednesday, 24 October 2018

Recount Week 2, Term 4



Your Task: Recount your earliest memory.


Planning:
Who:My uncle my aunty my mum my dad my cousins my nan my brothers my
What:My aunty and uncle was having a wedding
Where:Samoa and savaii
When:october 17th
How:My mum and dad told me and my brother






Writing:On October the 1st we went on a plain to Samoa.When we got to Samoa it felt so hot.Before we went to the Hotel we had to show our passports.When we got to the fairy we started going on it.It looked so amazing and huge.When the fairy stopped we got off.When we went on the bus to the hotel there was restaurant and a pool.When it was dinner we went to the restaurant.When we got to the restaurant we ordered pizza.While we were waiting for it to be cooked we went into our cabins.When it was ready my uncle told us it was ready.So we went to the restaurant and went on a long big table.

Thursday, 18 October 2018

2018, Writing, Recount

A few weeks ago’ my Nan was in hospital so we went to see her.When we got to the hospital my cousin and aunty were there.When we were going to talk to my Nan she was asleep and curled into a ball.When she woke up there was food and juice.But she wasn't allowed to drink or eat.A few minutes ago my cousin and aunty left.So we talked to my Nan. When it was night time we went out the door. My cousins and nephew and nieces.But my nephew and nieces waited outside for their mum and dad.When there mum and dad came out we all left and went to my nans house.When we got there we got matrices to sleep on and we got our blankets.

Tuesday, 25 September 2018

-Designing a sport - writing 2

-Designing a sport - writing 2

Write
Equipment:
What materials/things do you need for your sport?
A sponge and  two buckets of water
Setting:
Where can your game be played?
At two fields
Players:
How many players are needed? How many teams are there?
4 girls and 4 boys
Competition/ Cooperation:
Explain how the players have to cooperate. Explain how the players compete.
If one team gets all their water into the other teams bucket they win
Instructions:
Explain the rules of your game so that someone else could know how to play it.
1.You have to dip the sponge in the bucket
2.You have to carry it to the other team and squeezes it in the bucket
3.Than the other team has to do the same thing until one team fills the other teams bucket   





Objective/ Goal:
What is the goal of your game? How do players win?
If one team fills the other teams bucket they win
WRITE a task description
Write a short paragraph telling your blog readers what the task was for this week.
  • What did you learn? (WALT) We learned how to make another sport with no sport equipment  
  • What was the task?
  • Did you enjoy this task?
  • What did you find difficult?

Friday, 21 September 2018

Designing a sport: Planning and writing doc

Designing a sport




WALT organise and sequence our ideas.
WALT seek feedback and make changes to our writing.


Your task: You are going to be designing your own sport, using the instructions from the youtube video.


Use our word bank and word walls in the class to help you with words to use in your writing.


Write
Equipment:
What materials/things do you need for your sport?
A soft ball and a tennis racket
Setting:
Where can your game be played?
At a hard court
Players:
How many players are needed? How many teams are there?
There supposed to be 2 teams and there should be 4 players in each team  
Competition/ Cooperation:
Explain how the players have to cooperate. Explain how the players compete.
It is a Competition
Instructions:
Explain the rules of your game so that someone else could know how to play it.
You have to bounce the ball when it's not on the ground you have to hit it to the wall and then the other player had to do the same thing do the same thing until one player loses
Objective/ Goal:
What is the goal of your game? How do players win?
They win when the other player doesn't hit the ball


WRITE a task description
Write a short paragraph telling your blog readers what the task was for this week.
  • What did you learn? (WALT)We learned how to create our own sport.My equitmit is a soft ball and a tennis racket.The place for the game is had a hard court that has a wall.
  • What was the task?The task was that we had to create our own sport using any sport equipment  
  • Did you enjoy this task?I really enjoyed this task because it was really easy
  • What did you find difficult?

This week we did another writing assignment.We had to create our own sport.My equitmit was a soft ball and a tennis racket.   

Wednesday, 5 September 2018

Sheep dictation

I was following miss west picking up my paste then i realised she was in touching distance of my lamb.I let out a loud load bleat which echoed across the paddock my sleeping lamb lifted its head and turned towards us.It was slowly returning to its sleep.As i got closer and closer miss west was about to panic.She was holding her breath and froze.She sighed as i dogged her.She grabbed protectively of my lamb.      

Thursday, 30 August 2018

Points of view:Planing and writing doc

The mother sheep followed me along the path picking up her paste then she realised i was in touching distance of her lamb she let out a loud bleat witch echoed across the paddock the sleeping lamb lifted its head and turned towards us.It was slowly returning to its sleep.As the sheep got closer and closer.I thought either i should turn and run.I began to panic was she going to attack me.Holding my breath and froze.I sighed as the sheep dodged me.I grabbed  protectively of its lam.Whew that was a close call.

Thursday, 7 June 2018

Immersion assembly


 On Monday it was the first day of school and it was immersion assembly and team 1 was learning about.How to lift heavy objects.Then it was team 2 and they were learning about.How to get fit.Then it was team 3 and they were learning about.Wheels and we are learning about. Making things that fly in the air.


Friday, 2 March 2018

Dictation Race

Today was meant to be the day of the picnic.Sadly, it was raining today wich meant we couldn't go! Miss west had packed in her hat, sunblock and towel. Hopefully we will get there to go to the picnic later in the term as it is nice to go swimming and enjoy the sun at our very own beach!  




Today we did a challenge and it was a.pictation race and it was really really really.Hard and we have to put it on our blog.

Monday, 26 February 2018

Thursday, 15 February 2018

WRITING A NARITIVE

Once upon a time there was a little girl lived in a house and one day she went for an adventure and she went into the forest.She went very very far down the forest and when she went to the end of the forest and at the end of the forest there was a.Big brown pipe and she saw.A elephant trying to cross the big pipe so.She helped the elephant get across the big brown pipe and the elephant got across but then.It went night time and the girl said to the elephant.I have to go now see you tomorrow.Then she went back into the forest but.She was getting so so scared it was very late but then she saw a.Treehouse so she went up and up and up until.She got to the top so she went to have some dinner.Then she went to sleep.Then it was the morning so she went back home and had breakfast she forgot to see her alathant friend.So she went to go to her friendly elephant.Then she got back and had breakfast and had.Pancakes.Then the girl said to the elephant i really have to go now bye.So she went home.Then it was the morning.So she went to go see her friend but.It died.The End.  

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