Show Not Tell
Tell sentence: It was a cold and rainy day.
Show sentence: The wind was blasting so hard like someone was bumping you really hard.
So the trees were swaying everywhere like water. They were swaying so hard that
people were getting really bitter.
But at the same time there lips were turning violet like grapes.
It was raining and cold everyday. So people where getting really impaired
So the trees were swaying everywhere like water. They were swaying so hard that
people were getting really bitter.
But at the same time there lips were turning violet like grapes.
It was raining and cold everyday. So people where getting really impaired
Tell sentence: I went to the beach.
Show sentence: It was really really sizzling that people needed sun cream for their
body so they don’t get burnt like burnt toast.
So they had a swim.They were swimming all day that they got frosty like they were
in winter.But then they got really hot again
body so they don’t get burnt like burnt toast.
So they had a swim.They were swimming all day that they got frosty like they were
in winter.But then they got really hot again
Tell sentence: Carol bought new shoes because hers broke.
Show sentence: They were really really aged.So they broke and got really dusty and sloppy
like sticky pudding.So she brought new shoes.They were really really pure.So when she brought
them she wore them everyday.
them she wore them everyday.
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