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Saturday, 6 July 2019

Descriptive Language Writing. Dragon Story





Start writing here: 
Once Upon a time there were two girls named Phoenix and Julia. But
they were getting a bit bored. So they went on an adventure. They
went to a castle and when they got to the castle they saw a fierce
dragon with  long sharp nails. He had really sharp gooey teeth. But
then he trapped them in the castle and they couldn’t get out. A few
minutes later Phoenix found a note and the note said to look for a
lever. So they were looking for a lever. 1 minute later they found it. It
said to pull the lever. So Julia pulled it. When she pulled it another
note came out and it said. To find another lever. Because if you pull it
you will escape and get some weapons to defeat the dragon. You will
also get armour. So they pulled it and out came the weapons and
armour. So they put on some armour grabbed some weapons. But they
still had to find one more lever. So they were looking and looking for it.
But they couldn’t find it. It took them 6 hours to find it. It led them out
of the creepy dark castle. They were ready to fight the dragon. They
found some rope as well. But how were they supposed to fly? They
got there own dragon. So they got there dragon and flew up into the
air with their dragons big giant wings. They were gliding across the
sky following the fierce dragon. They couldn't catch up the fierce
dragon was too fast with his big wings. But they weren't giving up.
They were still trying to catch the dragon. So they grabbed the rope
and lasso it around the dragon. They were pulling it really hard that
the dragon couldn’t even breathe fire. Once they defeated him they
went back home and told there mum’s all about there adventure.

1 comment:

  1. Hi my name is Serenade a student at Paparore school the dragon story was so descriptive and so cool. it doesn't quit make sense but its really good.if you had a dragon in real life what would you do with it?

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