I am a Year 8 student at Pt England School in Auckland, NZ. I am in Room 1 and my teacher is Mr Moran.
Friday, 9 August 2019
Show Not Tell Task
Show Not Tell
Tell sentence: It was a cold and rainy day.
Show sentence: The wind was blasting so hard like someone was bumping you really hard.
So the trees were swaying everywhere like water. They were swaying so hard that
people were getting really bitter.
But at the same time there lips were turning violet like grapes.
It was raining and cold everyday. So people where getting really impaired
So the trees were swaying everywhere like water. They were swaying so hard that
people were getting really bitter.
But at the same time there lips were turning violet like grapes.
It was raining and cold everyday. So people where getting really impaired
Tell sentence: I went to the beach.
Show sentence: It was really really sizzling that people needed sun cream for their
body so they don’t get burnt like burnt toast.
So they had a swim.They were swimming all day that they got frosty like they were
in winter.But then they got really hot again
body so they don’t get burnt like burnt toast.
So they had a swim.They were swimming all day that they got frosty like they were
in winter.But then they got really hot again
Tell sentence: Carol bought new shoes because hers broke.
Show sentence: They were really really aged.So they broke and got really dusty and sloppy
like sticky pudding.So she brought new shoes.They were really really pure.So when she brought
them she wore them everyday.
them she wore them everyday.
Friday, 26 July 2019
David Attenborough Documentry Coastal Seas
Today we watched the Our Planet Documentary, narrated by David Attenborough, called Coastal Seas. Here are some interesting facts we learnt:
- 90 percent of marine creatures live coastal waters. This is because the sea floor is in reach of the sunlight.
- The documentary we watched was filmed in the Everglades National Park, in Florida USA.
- The lush meadows of the park support the marine life.
- The Giant Trevally and Sting Ray are extremely good hunters.
- Stingrays hunt for their prey that hide in the seagrass.
- There is a lot of food for the sea creatures, and for humans in the coastal waters.
- The bottlenose dolphin has a special way of hunting shoals of mullet. They create a circle around the fish and flick up the mud which makes the water murky - the mullet then get confused and jump up in the air, making it easy for the dolphins to catch the mullet.
- Coral reefs make up less than 1 % of all the marine species that live in the ocean.
- Coral reefs are missing an important member of the community-Sharks!
- Shark numbers have been dramatically reduced due to overfishing.
- Overfishing has reduced the shark population
Saturday, 6 July 2019
Descriptive Language Writing. Dragon Story
Start writing here:
Once Upon a time there were two girls named Phoenix and Julia. But they were getting a bit bored. So they went on an adventure. They
went to a castle and when they got to the castle they saw a fierce
dragon with long sharp nails. He had really sharp gooey teeth. But
then he trapped them in the castle and they couldn’t get out. A few
minutes later Phoenix found a note and the note said to look for a
lever. So they were looking for a lever. 1 minute later they found it. It
said to pull the lever. So Julia pulled it. When she pulled it another
note came out and it said. To find another lever. Because if you pull it
you will escape and get some weapons to defeat the dragon. You will
also get armour. So they pulled it and out came the weapons and
armour. So they put on some armour grabbed some weapons. But they
still had to find one more lever. So they were looking and looking for it.
But they couldn’t find it. It took them 6 hours to find it. It led them out
of the creepy dark castle. They were ready to fight the dragon. They
found some rope as well. But how were they supposed to fly? They
got there own dragon. So they got there dragon and flew up into the
air with their dragons big giant wings. They were gliding across the
sky following the fierce dragon. They couldn't catch up the fierce
dragon was too fast with his big wings. But they weren't giving up.
They were still trying to catch the dragon. So they grabbed the rope
and lasso it around the dragon. They were pulling it really hard that
the dragon couldn’t even breathe fire. Once they defeated him they
went back home and told there mum’s all about there adventure.
still had to find one more lever. So they were looking and looking for it.
But they couldn’t find it. It took them 6 hours to find it. It led them out
of the creepy dark castle. They were ready to fight the dragon. They
found some rope as well. But how were they supposed to fly? They
got there own dragon. So they got there dragon and flew up into the
air with their dragons big giant wings. They were gliding across the
sky following the fierce dragon. They couldn't catch up the fierce
dragon was too fast with his big wings. But they weren't giving up.
They were still trying to catch the dragon. So they grabbed the rope
and lasso it around the dragon. They were pulling it really hard that
the dragon couldn’t even breathe fire. Once they defeated him they
went back home and told there mum’s all about there adventure.
Wednesday, 3 July 2019
Week 10 Table Discussion
WHAT DO I LIKE MOST ABOUT NEW ZEALAND?
The thing that I like about New Zealand is the Schools because they don’t have that much schools in other countries and the schools in New Zealand is really fun. The other thing that I like about New Zealand is the fun places that they have like Rainbows End or the Zoo. The other things that I like about New Zealand is the stores that they have. Because with the stores that we have we can buy whatever we want. Also what I really like about New Zealand is the food. Because in other countries there food is really disgusting. I really like how we have lots of books and we also get them for free in schools. We also have lots of parks and lots of bikes and wheels. We also have lots of friends and family that lives in New Zealand. The other thing that I like about New Zealand is the devices because at my school we have Chromebooks. We also have really cool phones. Like iPhone and Samsung. We also have crayons and pencils and also rubbers. We also have really cool animals and sea animals. We have whales birds dogs cats lizards and much more. We also have really cool movies and really famous actors like Adam Sandler and Anna Kendrick. There really cool actors. We also have really cool boats. We also have kayaks.
The thing that I like about New Zealand is the Schools because they don’t have that much schools in other countries and the schools in New Zealand is really fun. The other thing that I like about New Zealand is the fun places that they have like Rainbows End or the Zoo. The other things that I like about New Zealand is the stores that they have. Because with the stores that we have we can buy whatever we want. Also what I really like about New Zealand is the food. Because in other countries there food is really disgusting. I really like how we have lots of books and we also get them for free in schools. We also have lots of parks and lots of bikes and wheels. We also have lots of friends and family that lives in New Zealand. The other thing that I like about New Zealand is the devices because at my school we have Chromebooks. We also have really cool phones. Like iPhone and Samsung. We also have crayons and pencils and also rubbers. We also have really cool animals and sea animals. We have whales birds dogs cats lizards and much more. We also have really cool movies and really famous actors like Adam Sandler and Anna Kendrick. There really cool actors. We also have really cool boats. We also have kayaks.
Monday, 10 June 2019
Certifercit from code.org 2!!!
When I got back home from School I went on Code.org.Like I said on the other one the link is in code.org
Sunday, 9 June 2019
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