Monday, 20 November 2017

Naritive writhing

Choose It Narrative

Today you will be writing a narrative.  In order to help you get started, we selected some pictures for you to use in your writing.  You must use ONE picture.

When you have decided which picture you want to use, delete the other 3 and enlarge the picture you have chosen.

Don’t forget! A narrative needs to have a beginning, middle and an end.  It also needs to have a problem (conflict) that is solved (resolved) by the end of the story.

Planning Space:
Cold cold cave
Ice spikes
Crelling white polar bear  
Icy water
Slippery ice ground
Cold cold wind
Icebergs dropping down the icey hill

P1 Meeting a polar bear.

Begin Writing Here:
Once upon a time there was a person that lived in the snow and she was so so so cold like ice.Then one day she found a cave.So she went inside and had a sleep because.It was nighttime and in that night she had a dream and the dream was.About a bear trying to eat her.Then…..She woke up she went outside and there was a big grelling white polar bear right behind her then.He was going to eat her.Then the girl said.Please don't eat me i'm just a little girl.Then the bear said.Oh i wasn't trying to eat you.Then the girl said.Oh then what were you doing i was trying to tell you to get out of my cave.Then the girl said.Oh sorry can we be friends.Then the bear said.Ok let's be friends.So they played and they played and they played.Until they grow up and then they met another.Bear and that bear was a.Girl and it was nighttime and she said.Can we all be friends and then they said………..No we can't and then she said.What wuy.Then they said.Because we don't want to be your friend.Then she said…………...I'm going to tell my family and they're stronger than you then the other polar bear said.Wait little girl.Then the lady said.Im not a little girl i'm a grownup now.
P2 Friendship broken
Then the polar bear said.Im not your friend any more.Our friendship is over.Then the lady said.Why then the polar bear said.Because you yelled at me.Im going to my family.Then the girl said.Well then i will be sarahs friend.Then the polar bear was so so sad.Then the lady said.Hey sarah.Then sarah said.Hey where's jake.Then the lady said.He yelled at me so i'm not his friend any more.Then sarah said.Why aren't you his friend.Then the lady said.Because he yelled at me.Then sarah said.Im not your friend.Then the lady said.Im getting back to my family.
P3 Family time.
The lady went home in a  plain and she told her family all about her trip and she said. I saw a polar bear and his name was jake and then we saw a girl polar bear named.Sarah then her mum said.Wow you really had a great holiday.Then her dad said.We have a present for you and the lady said.Yay.So she opened the present and it was a picture of two polar bears one was a girl and one was a boy and the girl's name was sarah and the boy's name was.Jake then the girl said.Thank You guys and then she said.That looks like my polar bear friends then her mum said.What does it well then lucky we got that picture.
P4 visitors
The doorbell rang so the lady went to the door and opened it and it was.Sarah and.Jake and then she said.Get out of my house.Then her mum and dad said.Be there friend and you're grounded.Then the lady cried and cried and cried the end.

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