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Thursday 30 November 2017

Sprint recount

Sprint Track

We have just been outside racing against our friends.

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Use these words above and below to help with starting your sentences.

Transition Words
Past tense
First...
Next...
Soon...
During…
While...
After...
Later...
At first…
Initially…
Once we…
Once I…
At last…
Finally…
In the end…
You should be telling the audience what has already happened since we have already had Fun Racing Morning!

E.g.
Watched
Had
Saw
laughed
If you can think of any others, use them! This is just to get you started.

Plan Here:
COOL WORDS:
First
Next
Once we
During
TOPIC SENTENCES:
P1: First Mr moran said the first group come up and when he slapped the slapper they ran and some of them came.1st.2d.3rd.4th and.Miss moala picked the.1rst.2nd and.3rd to the finals.    
P2:Then it was my group and i almost came last.But latisha came last.But i wasn't in the finals so i went back to my spot.

p3:Then it was the boys turn and some of them were in the finals.Because some of them came.1st.2nd and.3rd and.4th

P4:then we did hands and feet and central came last and Mr Moran and John came first but john was cheating because he was standing up.





Start your writing here:

Yesterday we went in 2 lines and went on the concrete and we were  having races.First it was Norah Jade to Leylani in the first group but it wasn't my group so i stayed in my spot waiting for my turn to race then the race was finished and the.1st.2nd.3rd.4th.was in the.Finals and in the finals was.Mia.Maddie.Nature and.Norah jade.Then it was the boys turn and the ones who was in the finals was.John.Joseph.Jerry and.someone else that i don't know.Then It was the finals.But...They had to crawl on their feet and hands and.Central came last.

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