Narrative Writing

Once upon a time there was a small cottage, and in that small cottage were three girls called Rebekah, Aaliyah, and  Nina. They were watching a movie, but one of the girls was bored. ‘’I’m bored’’ said Rebekah.

But Aaliyah and Nina were not bored so they just continued watching the Movie, so Rebekah thinked and thinked, and from all that thinking she finnaly found something to do, ‘’I know!’’ said Rebekah. ‘’What?’’ Said Aaliah. ‘’What if we go on an adventure?’’ Said Rebekah.

The two girls thinked if they wanted to go on an adventure’’Ok!’’ said Aaliyah, ‘’It might be fun!’’ said Nina.

So Rebekah, Aaliyah, and Nina packed some lunch and water and went on their adventure.
The three girls left the house as fast as they can, ‘’Come on guys!’’ said Nina. ‘’Where coming!’’ said Rebekah.

The three girls went outside to the fresh air, the first they went across was a creepy creepy bridge. ‘’Come on guys!’’ said Aaliah, ‘’I don’t know’’ said Nina, ‘’We might fall through the holes!’’ said Nina. ‘’No we won’t’’ said Rebekah.

The three girls went across the bridge carefully, at last. They made it across! ‘’Yay! We made it across without falling!’’ said Aaliah.

The girls continued their adventure, but they felt really tired, ‘’Guys, I’m tired. Let’s have some water’’ said Rebekah, ‘’Yup! I’m really really thirsty’’ said Aaliah. ‘’Same with me’’ said Nina.

The three girls grabbed some cups and the ginormus water bottle, they poured the water in the cups and had a drink. ‘’This is nice and cold’’ said Rebekah. ‘’I agree’’ said Aaliah. ‘’Come on!’’ said Nina.

The three girls continued with their adventure, at last they reached their destination. The mountains, ‘’WOW!’’ said Rebekah.

The three girls climbed up the mountain with their climbing tools, at last the girls reached the top! ‘’WOW!!!’’ said Aaliah. ‘’THIS VIEW IS AMAZING!!!’’ said Nina. ‘’Come on guys, let’s have some lunch’’ said Rebekah. 

The three girls digged into their picnic, ‘’Mmm, this is so good!’’ said Aaliah.

When the three girls were finished with their lunch, they headed back home. The three packed up their stuff and found a way out, a few hours later they were home. ‘’Aah home sweet home’’ said Nina.